http://stargateangel.deviantart.com/art/Daddy-s-Poem-34637266?offset=10#comments

Put a soothing BG music for best results. And please, read the whole thing.

This is sadder imo"
Déjeuner du matin

Il a mis le café
Dans la tasse
Il a mis le lait
Dans la tasse de café
Il a mis le sucre
Dans le café au lait
Avec la petite cuiller
Il a tourné
Il a bu le café au lait
Et il a reposé la tasse
Sans me parler
Il a allumé
Une cigarette
Il a fait des ronds
Avec la fumée
Il a mis les cendres
Dans le cendrier
Sans me parler
Sans me regarder
Il s'est levé
Il a mis
Son chapeau sur sa tête
Il a mis
Son manteau de pluie
Parce qu'il pleuvait
Et il est parti
Sous la pluie
Sans une parole
Sans me regarder
Et moi j'ai pris
Ma tête dans ma main
Et j'ai pleuré.

Translation:
He put the coffee
in the cup
He put the milk
in the cup of coffee
He put the sugar
in the cup of coffee and milk
with the little spoon
he stirred
He drank the cup of coffee and milk
And he put down the cup
Without speaking to me
He lighted
a cigarette
He made circles
with the smoke
He put the ashes
in the ashtray
Without speaking to me
Without looking at me
He got up
He put
his hat on his head
He put
his raincoat on
because it was raining
and he left
into the rain
without speaking to me
without looking to me
and me, I took
my head in my hands
And I cried

I get it...it's ok...but not "really sad"...isolation is a sad thought, but the poem was basic.

This is a reply to flame

@Flame : Aww! I guess the father was gay And the original is French right?
@Chem : I was going to punch you for a second there I like both the poems though

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