Yeah, I think that sounds like what I was aiming for. I probably would pick it up, but not really be that into reading it. A nursery rhyme typed play thing for adults... Hmm, sounds like a plan.
i have a cool writing project going on right now... but i always start with the content. sometimes the title doesn't even come about until the story is finished.
I feel like idealy it should relate to something the reader knows half way through.
It would revolve around areas in which I feel comfortable or know stuff in. It would probably be for older teens to adults instead of directly to adults.