Aaahhhh…
Oh, it's poem to my ears… oh man!
How can I describe the way I feel? Freaking great man!
Ok, let me see…
How can I begin?

Locked in Samthedragon's wine cellar all I had for lunch
Was red wine, more red wine and lucky charms
Red wine for breakfast and for brunch
And to soak it up an in-between three leaf clovers to munch
Samthedragon what ever happened to us?
Why did we have to break up?
All I asked for was a glass of Hi-C
You see I never really asked for much I can't imagine what's
Goin through your mind after such
A nasty break-up with that British hunk
Steve, Preid better back the hell up
And yeah baby, I want another crack at ya
You can beat me with any spatula that you want
I mean I really want ya bad ya noob
Pried you had your fun
I've come to kick ya in your sack of junk
Man I could use a fresh batch of red juice
So prepare your vernacular for Dracular acupuncture

Bagpipes from Ireland
When will it ever cease
For his sakes he's crazy to say the least
Bagpipes from Ireland
What's goin through my mind
Half the time when I rhyme we're blowin up like
Bagpipes from Ireland
Someone turn the vacancy sign on
Cause i'm gone, blowing up like
Bagpipes from Ireland
I run the streets and mack
Like a madman holdin a glad bag

Bagpipes from Ireland
Thinkin that you a smart guy
Sticking your nose in others people business
Bagpipes from Ireland
Ill tell you this dawg
Take your two pennies and buy a bagpipe with it

/Finish

the a graceful butcher of the English language! You have not only proved your poetry skills are comparable to a cacti but you attacked my Irish heritage witch i dont mind. You appear to have confessed your love to samthedragon in p2 line 12. Finally if you want to fight little man come out to long island, ill be waiting.

1-It's free style poetry. Grammar doesn't matter
2-Fool! You don't get it . I'm making fun of you. I'm talking as if I am you in the whole poem except the last few lines lol (That's why it's a "diss")
3-Alright. If I have to visit then wait up a bit of months till I power up from the gym. Otherwise you are welcome to come here any time

JK noob, it's just a diss. I don't need to fight you lmao.

You know preid. You once told me something that I took very offensively. And you simply said:

"Ahmed you fool, you should know by now i only pick on you in jest."

May I say the same now to you:

Pried you fool, you should know by now I only pick on you in jest.

Are we even now? Be honest.

hey if i disliked you i would never have made the founder thing, i just love fighting =P.

Hey, I don't dislike you either. I just wanted to get even with you.

*Shake hands for getting even*

Good Night

english is the language of savages anyway

Talk about the poem people not other stuff

Miss Girly Girl wrote:english is the language of savages anyway

lol you actually made me fall out of my chair with that joke!

>_> How'd I know this poem would be equal to a "white boy rap"?
Which is a good thing... It's not about ----- and ----!
But it's not good...

Congratulations. You have successfully butchered any good poems in English. You may hand back your student card and we'll give you a "I Killed Poetry" card. Thanks for your service. We hope you come again.

I going to edit the Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy poem section and have this be the worst form of poetry in the galaxy.

Dark Flame99966 wrote:Congratulations. You have successfully butchered any good poems in English. You may hand back your student card and we'll give you a "I Killed Poetry" card. Thanks for your service. We hope you come again.

English is a graceful language that offers many more ways to define oneself threw words. it is only threw English poetry that you can share your every feeling and love. the language i cant stand poetry in is Arabic, it just seems to harsh for me and i support English.

Lmao, the Arabic language started poetry pried. You don't know Arabic or care to know. So top BSing

Anyways this is more of a rap as Craig said than poetry.

^Wut, I myself dislike arabic poetry.

Because you don't understand the sophistication of the language

No, I just don't like the way our poetry sounds.

What matters is the meaning.

Ahmed wrote:Lmao, the Arabic language started poetry pried. You don't know Arabic or care to know. So top BSing

Anyways this is more of a rap as Craig said than poetry.

lol are you really so dense as to think Arabs started poetry? the first account of poetry ever was the epics of Gilgamesh, aka Mesopotamia. Btw in case you didn't know the Mesopotamia's spoke Sumerian not Arabic. After the epic of Gilgamesh come the Greek Iliad and Odyssey, still not seeing Arabic. If anything we can account poetry to Aristotle's works witch not only affected the Muslim golden age but ancient Rome and the Renaissance. Poetry outdated the Arab culture in every way. So ready to stop BSing?

Idiot. The Arabs revolutionized poetry. That's what I meant by "start"...but you're too dense. Freaking look it up before posting crap.

Ahmed wrote:Lmao, the Arabic language started poetry pried. You don't know Arabic or care to know. So top BSing

Anyways this is more of a rap as Craig said than poetry.

you said started not revolutionized and seeing as the only other people than you who commented on Arab poetry so far said they dont like it i would say even that point is off. If anything it was Renaissance Italy that revolutionized poetry and art.

William Shakespeare really irons this one in.

LOL

Great now we are taking 13 year old kids' opinions lmao

Anyhow now. The European renasicasne itself was started from Arab knowledge.

Ahmed wrote:LOL

Great now we are taking 13 year old kids' opinions lmao

Anyhow now. The European renasicasne itself was started from Arab knowledge.

no the Renaissance was sparked by the introduction of new trade routs and knowledge (mostly sparked by greek and roman influence mind you). Also the 'west' did much more with the tech and arts than the Muslim world witch then degraded into a slump.

It degrading to garbage is not my problem. Nor is that the focus of our discussion.

Anyhow, you are a very shallow fool. MOST of the knowledge that the Europeans learned at the time came from the Muslims/Arabs.

I will not argue with you further if you wont do the research.