I can compare your AMVs to DarkAngel89's if you'd like... I know a couple of very epic pro ones, whom gain about 100 subs everyday.... ._. Yes I actully talk to a couple... (Maybe like 2 or 3) xD
Okay, Time For Plan B by Enter Shikari. Sony Vegas is just like Windows Movie Maker if all you do is drag and drop. For vey advanced techniques You need to create different layers, go frame by frame (maybe) and a whole lot more. Lemme get you started where I think I got started...
Oh yeah.. I forgot my bad xD Well, I understand that windows movie maker doesn't have much effects or editing options but try to experiment with the effect... Yes even if it does make it flashy and very wierd... Enter Shikari by Enter Shikari
They both lack fx I might of added those 3 flashes, I don't remember. But To me it seemed like your amv was lacking timing, I understand that mine did too.. But mine had parts that looked like they were exactly with it. While in yours, it just seems like it was a clip, and a song. I understand the lyric going with the video, because he's going under. But It you cut, split, and edited it a little to have more better timing then it has.
Oooohhhh Aaaahhhhh! (Lol) It has very good timing, all around it. Also I like how (to me) it seems like it builds up to the 3rd verse, and keeps coming at the leveled up stage... That amv is really good, for one without fx :3 Not much to no complaints with that one..