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1The Final Hour Empty The Final Hour Sat Nov 24, 2007 8:11 pm

Dark Flame99966

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The little town of Rocksville was a lonely place with only 6 people and 1 class to learn in. English. These six people were Jack, Daniel, Ben, Katie, Ashley, and Stephanie. Stephanie was the teacher in Rocksville and one of two adults. The other adult was Jack. Jack was a rigged, black haired, white man with many scars from World War 1. Jack had mastered 10 different forms of martial arts.

One day, 16 Nazi soldiers came to the town in search of Jews. Although Jack the rest of the inhabitants of Rocksville were nnot Jewish, they did not believe in Christ and further were sent to an execution camp.

I'll be adding to this as soon as possible.

2The Final Hour Empty Re: The Final Hour Sat Dec 15, 2007 12:11 am

preid1220

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it's interesting but unbeleavabule.

3The Final Hour Empty Re: The Final Hour Sat Dec 15, 2007 12:42 pm

Dark Flame99966

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It's my first story. It is supposed to be a little bit of fiction and history even though I didn't mean for that when I started it.

4The Final Hour Empty Re: The Final Hour Sat Dec 15, 2007 3:22 pm

preid1220

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well for a first story it's ok but i see room for more detal also you cut the story off to soon. You may wanto to discrive the village a little more.

5The Final Hour Empty Re: The Final Hour Sat Dec 15, 2007 4:11 pm

Dark Flame99966

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I know. I was going to and I meant to but I just didn't

6The Final Hour Empty Re: The Final Hour Sat Dec 15, 2007 4:34 pm

preid1220

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well it's never good to put a story out there with only 1/3 finished

7The Final Hour Empty Re: The Final Hour Sat Dec 15, 2007 6:24 pm

Dark Flame99966

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I only started typing away. Never actually wrote this down and then thought what was going to happen next.

8The Final Hour Empty Re: The Final Hour Sat Dec 15, 2007 6:45 pm

preid1220

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well you need ot wright things like this down man

9The Final Hour Empty Re: The Final Hour Sat Dec 15, 2007 7:11 pm

Dark Flame99966

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When I start doing writing for fun(that means never).

10The Final Hour Empty Re: The Final Hour Sat Dec 15, 2007 7:24 pm

preid1220

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o come on wrighting can be a tun of fun!

11The Final Hour Empty Re: The Final Hour Sat Dec 15, 2007 7:58 pm

Dark Flame99966

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For hobos...

12The Final Hour Empty Re: The Final Hour Sat Dec 15, 2007 8:25 pm

preid1220

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... wow you have no idea! wrighting is grate! try it some time

13The Final Hour Empty Re: The Final Hour Sun Dec 16, 2007 6:22 pm

Dark Flame99966

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I would...for an assignment.
P.S.Come one Preid! Start spelling correctly

14The Final Hour Empty Re: The Final Hour Sun Dec 16, 2007 6:33 pm

preid1220

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i'm sry i stink at gramer

15The Final Hour Empty Re: The Final Hour Sun Dec 16, 2007 6:35 pm

Dark Flame99966

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It's not grammar. It's the words

16The Final Hour Empty Re: The Final Hour Sun Dec 16, 2007 6:38 pm

preid1220

preid1220
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well i'm bad at spelling slanty

17The Final Hour Empty Re: The Final Hour Sun Dec 16, 2007 6:39 pm

Dark Flame99966

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Thought you said you got As in everything but italian

18The Final Hour Empty Re: The Final Hour Sun Dec 16, 2007 6:40 pm

preid1220

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i did, we didnt get graded on anything involveing speeling

19The Final Hour Empty Re: The Final Hour Sun Dec 16, 2007 6:41 pm

Dark Flame99966

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Spelling...
Lol, are you trying to annoy me or are you dyslexic?

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