this is a made up game where you have to write 5-30 words of a story per post, no double posting is allowed and and here's the twist, no writing about things which are unlikely to happen (raised from the dead or killing 10 guys at once for example).
no repetitive posts
try to keep the story interesting
the more you can say in your posts the better it is, for example
"suddenly the room goes black" is much worse than "As I sit up I start
feeling faint, i look at my drink trying to remember if it tasted
strange... I black out and hit the floor hard"
I'll get the ball rolling...

walking home from work one day i visited the bank and as i was getting money out a large, black car screeched to a halt outside the front door.

I turned around and saw a man in black glasses with a tux on coming out of the car.

He looked like he was up to no good. A mobster, perhaps.

he walks in and pauses a moment to check his watch, reaching into his jacket he barks "Everyone get on the floor. Quickly!".

I hesitate. But when he takes his gun out I fall on the ground.

He surveys the room, looking for whoever he may want to kill. I continue lying there on the ground, shivering in fear. His eyes fall on me...

He yells "Get up...punk". I start getting up...

Once I have fully risen to my feet, I look him directly in the eye. Big mistake. He immediately stabs me with his gun, knocking the wind out of me and drawing a fair amount of blood.

When I open my eyes again I find myself in the hospital.

I wonder aloud, "Why am I here? And... Why.. Is the world... Spinning so... Fas-..." I don't have time to finish my last word before I am knocked out once again, but this time because of anisthetics.

As I regain consciousness I see one of the hospitals wards, there is an empty seat at the side of the bed with a long coat draped over it...

That coat triggers some vague memories in my mind. I can't remember where or when I saw it, but I remember that coat.

I call a nurse over and ask her to whom does the coat belong to.

The nurse says "A young woman was sitting there..." as if that was her cue the door opens and you see your sister smiling widely at you.

The sister asks how am I doing and how did this happen to me.

I quickly make up a lie and say "Oh, I fell onto a nail." She believes me, of course.

Lucy (your sister) repeats words a doctor told her earlier "we will release him soon, when he stops passing out"

I wake up and focused, I tell the doctor I am ready to leave.

The doctor makes a quick job of his examination before declaring I'm fit to leave, I ask my sister what she is doing here. I can't remember how long It's been since I saw her.

She replies "I'm here to visit you!"

as I walk to the street corner a sudden wave a fatigue blows over me, I stand tall and act like nothing had happened so as to not worry my sister, that was one of the worst mistakes of my life.

OOC: Pried you are still in the hospital...which corner are you talking about?

I'll start from my sentence:

As I stand up and stretch my limbs, I start to feel really off balance. The world starts spinning around really fast again...

ooc: if the world star spinning then in no way are you ready to leave but the doctor declared that you were fit to leave, in witch case a took up at the part that they had all ready left the hospital and were talking but as they were walking a dizzy spell hangs over the antagonist.

Pried is correct...

Pried continue it.