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    Post by Theory Thu Mar 12, 2009 4:16 pm

    This Island I live and die on

    Somehow I feel....out of place

    Why? Am I not one of them?

    Am I not human?

    "Weird" they say, then I am not

    An Alien on the wrong ship I am

    For if I was human

    I'd be "normal"

    As if I know such a thing
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    Post by Ahmed Thu Mar 12, 2009 8:46 pm

    Very nice. Did you write that?
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    Post by Doc Thu Mar 12, 2009 8:49 pm

    doesn't rhyme very much ...
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    Post by Ahmed Thu Mar 12, 2009 9:39 pm

    A poem doen't need to rhyme.
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    Post by Theory Thu Mar 12, 2009 10:06 pm

    Yep, wrote is yesterday

    And only a few of my poems rhyme. I usually free write, meaning no structure.
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    Post by Ahmed Thu Mar 12, 2009 10:15 pm

    Theory, about how many friends do you have? (An honest question)

    Sorry if you think my question is stupid, blame my health teacher who brainwashed me. Wink
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    Post by Theory Thu Mar 12, 2009 11:27 pm

    Um....16 at least

    That was hard
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    Post by Ahmed Thu Mar 12, 2009 11:51 pm

    Oh ok, I thought you wrote for phycological reasons Razz . Well thats good to here.
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    Post by Theory Fri Mar 13, 2009 12:06 am

    Nope, all my poems (at least 30 now) are all just deep thinking
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    Post by Ahmed Fri Mar 13, 2009 12:11 am

    Want to become a writer?
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    Post by Theory Fri Mar 13, 2009 12:12 am

    Poet, as a side job
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    Post by Hassan Fri Mar 13, 2009 4:09 am

    great poem, I like it. thumbs up
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