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Theory
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 |  Subject: Outcast (Poem)  Thu Mar 12, 2009 4:16 pm | |
| This Island I live and die on
Somehow I feel....out of place
Why? Am I not one of them?
Am I not human?
"Weird" they say, then I am not
An Alien on the wrong ship I am
For if I was human
I'd be "normal"
As if I know such a thing | |
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Ahmed
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| | Subject: Re: Outcast (Poem) Thu Mar 12, 2009 8:46 pm | |
| Very nice. Did you write that? | |
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| | Subject: Re: Outcast (Poem) Thu Mar 12, 2009 8:49 pm | |
| doesn't rhyme very much ... | |
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| | Subject: Re: Outcast (Poem) Thu Mar 12, 2009 9:39 pm | |
| A poem doen't need to rhyme. | |
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Theory
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| | Subject: Re: Outcast (Poem) Thu Mar 12, 2009 10:06 pm | |
| Yep, wrote is yesterday
And only a few of my poems rhyme. I usually free write, meaning no structure. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Outcast (Poem) Thu Mar 12, 2009 10:15 pm | |
| Theory, about how many friends do you have? (An honest question) Sorry if you think my question is stupid, blame my health teacher who brainwashed me.  | |
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Theory
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| | Subject: Re: Outcast (Poem) Thu Mar 12, 2009 11:27 pm | |
| Um....16 at least
That was hard | |
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| | Subject: Re: Outcast (Poem) Thu Mar 12, 2009 11:51 pm | |
| Oh ok, I thought you wrote for phycological reasons  . Well thats good to here. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Outcast (Poem) Fri Mar 13, 2009 12:06 am | |
| Nope, all my poems (at least 30 now) are all just deep thinking | |
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| | Subject: Re: Outcast (Poem) Fri Mar 13, 2009 12:11 am | |
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| | Subject: Re: Outcast (Poem) Fri Mar 13, 2009 12:12 am | |
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| | Subject: Re: Outcast (Poem) Fri Mar 13, 2009 4:09 am | |
| great poem, I like it.  | |
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