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    Post by Theory Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:26 pm

    These are not all my poems, still haven't typed up all of them.... Rolling Eyes Enjoy Exclamation






    +-The Web-+





    Entangled





    In Me





    Embraced





    Cold Strings





    Pulling Upon





    Our Souls





    Lost In





    The Web












    ))Knock Knock((





    Somebody Knocking





    Upon the door





    Gonna clean up the mess





    We all adore





    Can't be seen, can't be heard





    My Mother....knocking on the door.












    -^People^-





    Echo Echo





    We are so loud.





    Food Food





    We are so fat.





    Sins Sins





    We are so evil.





    Lust Lust





    We are so....intimate.





    People People





    We are so proud.















    ^^~Love~^^





    Loud in the Morning.





    Seen from afar.





    Close to the soul.





    Content in the Afternoon.





    Slowly fading.





    Lust to lone.





    At Night, all alone.












    0-Circle-0





    At the beginning we are born.





    Then we grow into a curved line.





    Slowly becomming half a moon.





    Later still we make a turn.





    We near the end of our journey.





    Becomming the path.





    For a new circle to form.












    -->Blade<--





    Slender, Thick.





    Waiting to flick.





    Dying for blood.





    Under the hood, a worn glove.





    With a thrust and a slash.





    A hack at bat.





    It comes with a booming...





    THWAK












    ~~Mist~~





    Cold, Shallow





    Touch Sweet





    Lips even sweeter!





    Arms wrapped around me





    As we dance on the ground





    Slow Kiss, one last touch





    A lasting mist, of my blush.












    (^*^)A Flower(^*^)





    A solemn sight.





    A closed bud.





    A smell delight.





    A poison intoxication.





    A wonderful scenery.





    A deathly decent.












    ~^~Ink~^~





    Ink it is I write.





    Nothing more.





    Ink it is I speak.





    Nothing less.





    Ink it is I feel.





    Nothing further.





    Ink it is You read.





    Nothing more.





    Ink it is You learn.





    Nothing more.





    Ink it is You show.





    Nothing further.












    )^(Mind)^(





    I am kind, gentle, loving.
    A great deed, a good man. Sane
    and solemn.





    I am deceittful, conniving, rough edged. An eveil sin, a
    born liar.


    Insane and crazy.





    Transition of the Mind.












    #!~Wait And Bleed~!#





    Inside my shell.





    The air rising.





    My blood rushed.





    Air exaulted.





    Adrenaline in vien.





    Inside the shell.





    I wait to bleed.





    The blood of hate.












    *`*(Skin)*`*





    Wrapped.





    Folded.





    Warm.





    Cold.





    White.





    Black.





    Rigid.





    Soft.





    Flexible.





    Stiff.





    Cut.





    Gash.





    Life.





    Death.












    %^*Pulse of the Devil*^%





    Blood Drawn.





    Knife slit.





    Seeping Through.





    A Scream.





    A Silence.





    A Science.





    Kill of the living.





    To procreate the dead.












    *B*L*I*N*D*





    Darkness.





    Elude.





    Illusion.





    Curse.





    Gift.





    Eye.





    Wall.












    ))<Decision>((





    Do I do?





    Do I don’t?





    Do I hide?





    Do I run?





    Do I talk?





    Do I whisper?





    Do I live?





    Do I die?





    Do I think?





    Do I follow?





    Do I laugh?





    Do I cry?





    Do I wake?





    Do I sleep?





    Do I walk?





    Do I run?





    Do I read?





    Do I write?












    =+-Journal-+=





    My writing, untold.





    My writing, unleashed.





    Your eyes, opened.





    Your minds, eased.





    My hand, grace.





    My mind, explored.





    Your soul, exploited.





    Your virginity, expelled.



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    -Poem-










    A shackle of word.





    It leads the heard.





    Like dog and sheep.





    Watch as I lead
    you.





    And so here I end.





    This little gem.






    Didn’t you think this is a




    Pretty, poetic, poem.

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    <Mask>





    Our face a mask





    Within it a flask





    It holds our soul





    Pouring, evermore




    We lose ourselves to others






    The mask copies another





    And the flask we had





    Like the wings of a bird






    Is gone, evermore


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    ##^Music^##





    Hear this word





    Hear this sound





    All around





    Don’t you hear?





    The music so bliss


    Like a hersheys kiss





    Sweet. Solemn. Solace.






    Pen in hand





    Paper on stand





    I hope you’ve enjoyed





    My final note
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    Post by samthedragon Sun Nov 23, 2008 11:25 am

    That is just terrible... just... just... terrible...
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    Post by Hassan Sun Nov 23, 2008 11:52 am

    I think its quite interesting. especially the rhetoric and the syntax!

    sam, give a reason,please do not be so brutal. Thanks.
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    Post by samthedragon Sun Nov 23, 2008 12:10 pm

    Hassan wrote:I think its quite interesting. especially the rhetoric and the syntax!

    sam, give a reason,please do not be so brutal. Thanks.

    reason? Did you READ the poems? O.o

    I wrote this when I was 17

    The earth is nothing more than a clock
    Counting down to the end of all life
    Life, though it my be a great shock
    Is nothing than a wait for the syth
    To be sythed by the grand death, you understand
    Is nothing more than saying goodbye
    Before leaving this familiar land
    But going no further than a cry, a black tie
    A black tie worn by your family and friends
    Shown as nothing more than a need
    To remind themselves your just round the bend
    In the next room, waiting for you and me
    The room you must know is just but a step
    A waiting room with a door either end
    Where thousands of saved are kept
    Waiting for the return of their master and friend

    I am a lot older and better at writing now, that was really the first poem I ever sat down and wrote o.O
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    Post by Hassan Sun Nov 23, 2008 12:12 pm

    Well, you should tell Theory how he can improve his poetic skills then!
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    Post by Ahmed Sun Nov 23, 2008 3:08 pm

    They are good. Also Sam's poem is good.

    Keep it up.
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    Post by Theory Sun Nov 23, 2008 10:56 pm

    Well, what exactly is "terrible"? The subject matter? The way I write?

    You seem more or less too absorbed in your own writing to appreciate others works.

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