The Final Hour

The little town of Rocksville was a lonely place with only 6 people and 1 class to learn in. English. These six people were Jack, Daniel, Ben, Katie, Ashley, and Stephanie. Stephanie was the teacher in Rocksville and one of two adults. The other adult was Jack. Jack was a rigged, black haired, white man with many scars from World War 1. Jack had mastered 10 different forms of martial arts.

One day, 16 Nazi soldiers came to the town in search of Jews. Although Jack the rest of the inhabitants of Rocksville were nnot Jewish, they did not believe in Christ and further were sent to an execution camp.

I'll be adding to this as soon as possible.

it's interesting but unbeleavabule.

It's my first story. It is supposed to be a little bit of fiction and history even though I didn't mean for that when I started it.

well for a first story it's ok but i see room for more detal also you cut the story off to soon. You may wanto to discrive the village a little more.

I know. I was going to and I meant to but I just didn't

well it's never good to put a story out there with only 1/3 finished

I only started typing away. Never actually wrote this down and then thought what was going to happen next.

well you need ot wright things like this down man

When I start doing writing for fun(that means never).

o come on wrighting can be a tun of fun!

For hobos...

... wow you have no idea! wrighting is grate! try it some time

I would...for an assignment.
P.S.Come one Preid! Start spelling correctly

i'm sry i stink at gramer

It's not grammar. It's the words

well i'm bad at spelling

Thought you said you got As in everything but italian

i did, we didnt get graded on anything involveing speeling

Spelling...
Lol, are you trying to annoy me or are you dyslexic?