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Fifi NH Member
Number of posts : 7932 Username Change Points : 13314 Reputation : 5 Registration date : 2009-11-11 Mood : Country :
| Subject: Poems, Pieces, and Such Fri Apr 16, 2010 9:56 pm | |
| I will be posting either poems I made or thought were very good i'd want to share with you guys .. here is my first one so far
-Inspiration
sometimes we wonder when we will feel the thunder deep within us that sleeps asunder
we search far and wide and yet we still hide from what we are looking for and sometimes it is right in front of her
we want that moment that lies dormant that will make us pround and yet we are blind when it screams so loud
open your eyes and make us see that big large key that open the doors and upon that day we will all soar
we no longer have to wonder when we will feel the thunder as long as we help each other become the best part of the new world orders | |
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Ahmed NH Admin
Number of posts : 51452 Username Change Points : 61089 Reputation : 147 Registration date : 2007-10-14 Mood : Country :
| Subject: Re: Poems, Pieces, and Such Fri Apr 16, 2010 9:57 pm | |
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SmexyGenius NH Member
Number of posts : 981 Username Change Points : 6874 Reputation : 1 Registration date : 2008-09-17 Mood :
| Subject: Re: Poems, Pieces, and Such Fri Apr 16, 2010 9:58 pm | |
| Cookie, Oh cookie, How you taunt me, With your fiendish taste, Your devilish charms, I could eat a thousand, Of your brothers and sisters, But still, crave just one more, In fact just the thought, Of your scrumptious taste, Sends me into a frenzy, An addiction I cannot stop, So, I’m afraid to tell you that, You are my next on my list, Oh large delicious cookie. | |
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Fifi NH Member
Number of posts : 7932 Username Change Points : 13314 Reputation : 5 Registration date : 2009-11-11 Mood : Country :
| Subject: Re: Poems, Pieces, and Such Fri Apr 16, 2010 9:59 pm | |
| - Ahmed IV wrote:
- Did you make this one?
yes lol Smexy hahaha | |
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Ahmed NH Admin
Number of posts : 51452 Username Change Points : 61089 Reputation : 147 Registration date : 2007-10-14 Mood : Country :
| Subject: Re: Poems, Pieces, and Such Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:05 pm | |
| Nice Lmao smexy My poem: O World Simple yet so complicated You know us We think we know you But we build new glasses To look at you with While you don't wear glasses Omg Im horrible | |
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Fifi NH Member
Number of posts : 7932 Username Change Points : 13314 Reputation : 5 Registration date : 2009-11-11 Mood : Country :
| Subject: Re: Poems, Pieces, and Such Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:11 pm | |
| nono thats was not horrible!! just keep adding! what i like to do is called quick write.. you read a poem and then write as quickly as you can all that comes to mind! it always comes out good! go ahead and give it a try... heres a poem to use this is my favorite poem this guy makes fun of love poems thats why i love it! hahaha Litany You are the bread and the knife, The crystal goblet and the wine... -Jacques Crickillon You are the bread and the knife, the crystal goblet and the wine. You are the dew on the morning grass and the burning wheel of the sun. You are the white apron of the baker, and the marsh birds suddenly in flight. However, you are not the wind in the orchard, the plums on the counter, or the house of cards. And you are certainly not the pine-scented air. There is just no way that you are the pine-scented air. It is possible that you are the fish under the bridge, maybe even the pigeon on the general's head, but you are not even close to being the field of cornflowers at dusk. And a quick look in the mirror will show that you are neither the boots in the corner nor the boat asleep in its boathouse. It might interest you to know, speaking of the plentiful imagery of the world, that I am the sound of rain on the roof. I also happen to be the shooting star, the evening paper blowing down an alley and the basket of chestnuts on the kitchen table. I am also the moon in the trees and the blind woman's tea cup. But don't worry, I'm not the bread and the knife. You are still the bread and the knife. You will always be the bread and the knife, not to mention the crystal goblet and--somehow--the wine. - Billy Collins | |
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Fifi NH Member
Number of posts : 7932 Username Change Points : 13314 Reputation : 5 Registration date : 2009-11-11 Mood : Country :
| Subject: Re: Poems, Pieces, and Such Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:12 pm | |
| now write what comes to mind reading this!! | |
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Ahmed NH Admin
Number of posts : 51452 Username Change Points : 61089 Reputation : 147 Registration date : 2007-10-14 Mood : Country :
| Subject: Re: Poems, Pieces, and Such Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:13 pm | |
| Food! Breakfast to be specific.
Where did I hear the name Billy Collins before? Hmm....Oxeclean? | |
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Fifi NH Member
Number of posts : 7932 Username Change Points : 13314 Reputation : 5 Registration date : 2009-11-11 Mood : Country :
| Subject: Re: Poems, Pieces, and Such Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:14 pm | |
| dude i mean you write more than that.. ughh you fool thats Billy Mays | |
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Ahmed NH Admin
Number of posts : 51452 Username Change Points : 61089 Reputation : 147 Registration date : 2007-10-14 Mood : Country :
| Subject: Re: Poems, Pieces, and Such Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:16 pm | |
| Lol...Billy Mays...lol
Ok, some guy is talking about his breakfast and house supplies? Better? | |
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Fifi NH Member
Number of posts : 7932 Username Change Points : 13314 Reputation : 5 Registration date : 2009-11-11 Mood : Country :
| Subject: Re: Poems, Pieces, and Such Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:19 pm | |
| wth!! gosh you freakish child!! lol
ok ok here write what you think of love poems then | |
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Ahmed NH Admin
Number of posts : 51452 Username Change Points : 61089 Reputation : 147 Registration date : 2007-10-14 Mood : Country :
| Subject: Re: Poems, Pieces, and Such Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:19 pm | |
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Fifi NH Member
Number of posts : 7932 Username Change Points : 13314 Reputation : 5 Registration date : 2009-11-11 Mood : Country :
| Subject: Re: Poems, Pieces, and Such Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:22 pm | |
| noooo ahh!! i feel bad for your english teacher!!!!!!
no i want YOU to write what you think about love poems | |
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SmexyGenius NH Member
Number of posts : 981 Username Change Points : 6874 Reputation : 1 Registration date : 2008-09-17 Mood :
| Subject: Re: Poems, Pieces, and Such Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:25 pm | |
| love poems corny sappy, romantic makes ur gf want u ...love poems...
i forgot wat this poem format is called or if i even did it properly.. | |
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Ahmed NH Admin
Number of posts : 51452 Username Change Points : 61089 Reputation : 147 Registration date : 2007-10-14 Mood : Country :
| Subject: Re: Poems, Pieces, and Such Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:27 pm | |
| I think you were trying to make a haiku.
Love Poems
Pointless Just words The lover shapes the Poem The receiver gets a different message Love Poems | |
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Fifi NH Member
Number of posts : 7932 Username Change Points : 13314 Reputation : 5 Registration date : 2009-11-11 Mood : Country :
| Subject: Re: Poems, Pieces, and Such Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:28 pm | |
| hahaha good job Semxy!! good job Ahmed you finally got something! | |
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Ahmed NH Admin
Number of posts : 51452 Username Change Points : 61089 Reputation : 147 Registration date : 2007-10-14 Mood : Country :
| Subject: Re: Poems, Pieces, and Such Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:29 pm | |
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Fifi NH Member
Number of posts : 7932 Username Change Points : 13314 Reputation : 5 Registration date : 2009-11-11 Mood : Country :
| Subject: Re: Poems, Pieces, and Such Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:31 pm | |
| whatt???? no way i suck at love poems | |
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SmexyGenius NH Member
Number of posts : 981 Username Change Points : 6874 Reputation : 1 Registration date : 2008-09-17 Mood :
| Subject: Re: Poems, Pieces, and Such Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:31 pm | |
| nah it wasnt a haiku.. cinquane or something idk maybe limerick..but i dont think so haiku = 3 lines + that syllable count | |
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Fifi NH Member
Number of posts : 7932 Username Change Points : 13314 Reputation : 5 Registration date : 2009-11-11 Mood : Country :
| Subject: Re: Poems, Pieces, and Such Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:37 pm | |
| Your soft touch is nothing but only soft to a tree because you cant tell the difference Your smile matches the sun, bright and yellow Everytime you look at me i notice you eyes and your brows point the same way.. to hell Gosh what a man i must say..
lol thats all i got so far | |
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SmexyGenius NH Member
Number of posts : 981 Username Change Points : 6874 Reputation : 1 Registration date : 2008-09-17 Mood :
| Subject: Re: Poems, Pieces, and Such Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:40 pm | |
| dont ever write a love poem to the guy u like lmao =p | |
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Fifi NH Member
Number of posts : 7932 Username Change Points : 13314 Reputation : 5 Registration date : 2009-11-11 Mood : Country :
| Subject: Re: Poems, Pieces, and Such Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:41 pm | |
| hahaha its for you Smexi its for our past relationship | |
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Ahmed NH Admin
Number of posts : 51452 Username Change Points : 61089 Reputation : 147 Registration date : 2007-10-14 Mood : Country :
| Subject: Re: Poems, Pieces, and Such Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:42 pm | |
| +1 to smexy Why would you mention hell in a love poem? | |
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Fifi NH Member
Number of posts : 7932 Username Change Points : 13314 Reputation : 5 Registration date : 2009-11-11 Mood : Country :
| Subject: Re: Poems, Pieces, and Such Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:45 pm | |
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SmexyGenius NH Member
Number of posts : 981 Username Change Points : 6874 Reputation : 1 Registration date : 2008-09-17 Mood :
| Subject: Re: Poems, Pieces, and Such Fri Apr 16, 2010 10:45 pm | |
| our past relationship? lol so my eyes are pointed to hell yet my smile+ touch are both so sexy ...hmm.. | |
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