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Steve NH Member
Number of posts : 7323 Username Change Points : 11443 Reputation : 33 Registration date : 2007-11-29 Mood :
| Subject: realistic story telling game Wed May 27, 2009 10:46 pm | |
| this is a made up game where you have to write 5-30 words of a story per post, no double posting is allowed and and here's the twist, no writing about things which are unlikely to happen (raised from the dead or killing 10 guys at once for example). no repetitive posts try to keep the story interesting the more you can say in your posts the better it is, for example "suddenly the room goes black" is much worse than "As I sit up I start feeling faint, i look at my drink trying to remember if it tasted strange... I black out and hit the floor hard" I'll get the ball rolling...
walking home from work one day i visited the bank and as i was getting money out a large, black car screeched to a halt outside the front door.
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Ahmed NH Admin
Number of posts : 51452 Username Change Points : 61089 Reputation : 147 Registration date : 2007-10-14 Mood : Country :
| Subject: Re: realistic story telling game Wed May 27, 2009 10:48 pm | |
| I turned around and saw a man in black glasses with a tux on coming out of the car. | |
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Fangy NH Retired Moderator
Number of posts : 8314 Username Change Points : 14227 Reputation : 71 Registration date : 2009-03-23 Mood : Country :
| Subject: Re: realistic story telling game Wed May 27, 2009 11:04 pm | |
| He looked like he was up to no good. A mobster, perhaps. | |
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Steve NH Member
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| Subject: Re: realistic story telling game Wed May 27, 2009 11:14 pm | |
| he walks in and pauses a moment to check his watch, reaching into his jacket he barks "Everyone get on the floor. Quickly!". | |
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Ahmed NH Admin
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| Subject: Re: realistic story telling game Wed May 27, 2009 11:21 pm | |
| I hesitate. But when he takes his gun out I fall on the ground. | |
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Fangy NH Retired Moderator
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| Subject: Re: realistic story telling game Wed May 27, 2009 11:55 pm | |
| He surveys the room, looking for whoever he may want to kill. I continue lying there on the ground, shivering in fear. His eyes fall on me... | |
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Ahmed NH Admin
Number of posts : 51452 Username Change Points : 61089 Reputation : 147 Registration date : 2007-10-14 Mood : Country :
| Subject: Re: realistic story telling game Wed May 27, 2009 11:57 pm | |
| He yells "Get up...punk". I start getting up... | |
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Fangy NH Retired Moderator
Number of posts : 8314 Username Change Points : 14227 Reputation : 71 Registration date : 2009-03-23 Mood : Country :
| Subject: Re: realistic story telling game Wed May 27, 2009 11:59 pm | |
| Once I have fully risen to my feet, I look him directly in the eye. Big mistake. He immediately stabs me with his gun, knocking the wind out of me and drawing a fair amount of blood. | |
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Ahmed NH Admin
Number of posts : 51452 Username Change Points : 61089 Reputation : 147 Registration date : 2007-10-14 Mood : Country :
| Subject: Re: realistic story telling game Thu May 28, 2009 12:01 am | |
| When I open my eyes again I find myself in the hospital. | |
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Fangy NH Retired Moderator
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| Subject: Re: realistic story telling game Thu May 28, 2009 12:03 am | |
| I wonder aloud, "Why am I here? And... Why.. Is the world... Spinning so... Fas-..." I don't have time to finish my last word before I am knocked out once again, but this time because of anisthetics. | |
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Steve NH Member
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| Subject: Re: realistic story telling game Thu May 28, 2009 12:27 am | |
| As I regain consciousness I see one of the hospitals wards, there is an empty seat at the side of the bed with a long coat draped over it... | |
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Fangy NH Retired Moderator
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| Subject: Re: realistic story telling game Thu May 28, 2009 12:29 am | |
| That coat triggers some vague memories in my mind. I can't remember where or when I saw it, but I remember that coat. | |
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Ahmed NH Admin
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| Subject: Re: realistic story telling game Thu May 28, 2009 12:32 am | |
| I call a nurse over and ask her to whom does the coat belong to. | |
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Steve NH Member
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| Subject: Re: realistic story telling game Thu May 28, 2009 12:35 am | |
| The nurse says "A young woman was sitting there..." as if that was her cue the door opens and you see your sister smiling widely at you. | |
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Ahmed NH Admin
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| Subject: Re: realistic story telling game Thu May 28, 2009 12:37 am | |
| The sister asks how am I doing and how did this happen to me. | |
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Fangy NH Retired Moderator
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| Subject: Re: realistic story telling game Thu May 28, 2009 12:43 am | |
| I quickly make up a lie and say "Oh, I fell onto a nail." She believes me, of course. | |
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Steve NH Member
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| Subject: Re: realistic story telling game Thu May 28, 2009 12:48 am | |
| Lucy (your sister) repeats words a doctor told her earlier "we will release him soon, when he stops passing out" | |
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Ahmed NH Admin
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| Subject: Re: realistic story telling game Thu May 28, 2009 12:54 am | |
| I wake up and focused, I tell the doctor I am ready to leave. | |
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Steve NH Member
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| Subject: Re: realistic story telling game Thu May 28, 2009 12:31 pm | |
| The doctor makes a quick job of his examination before declaring I'm fit to leave, I ask my sister what she is doing here. I can't remember how long It's been since I saw her. | |
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Fangy NH Retired Moderator
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| Subject: Re: realistic story telling game Thu May 28, 2009 4:04 pm | |
| She replies "I'm here to visit you!" | |
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preid1220 NH Moderator
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| Subject: Re: realistic story telling game Thu May 28, 2009 5:52 pm | |
| as I walk to the street corner a sudden wave a fatigue blows over me, I stand tall and act like nothing had happened so as to not worry my sister, that was one of the worst mistakes of my life. | |
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Ahmed NH Admin
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| Subject: Re: realistic story telling game Thu May 28, 2009 6:35 pm | |
| OOC: Pried you are still in the hospital...which corner are you talking about? | |
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Fangy NH Retired Moderator
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| Subject: Re: realistic story telling game Thu May 28, 2009 7:14 pm | |
| I'll start from my sentence:
As I stand up and stretch my limbs, I start to feel really off balance. The world starts spinning around really fast again... | |
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preid1220 NH Moderator
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| Subject: Re: realistic story telling game Thu May 28, 2009 7:58 pm | |
| ooc: if the world star spinning then in no way are you ready to leave but the doctor declared that you were fit to leave, in witch case a took up at the part that they had all ready left the hospital and were talking but as they were walking a dizzy spell hangs over the antagonist. | |
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Ahmed NH Admin
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| Subject: Re: realistic story telling game Thu May 28, 2009 8:02 pm | |
| Pried is correct...
Pried continue it. | |
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